April 25 1915
12.00 am
It was noon ...we arrived at Gallipoli. People were hiding in the bushes we quickly dug trenches and waited for them to come out. There was a moment of silence. Boom! snipers shot my friends and the battle started. Some of us started to charge up and get closer like me. Soon a sniper shot me in the leg. I felt a warm feeling and my heart started beating with Adrenalin, and I realized I was shot on the leg. People shouted ‘’come back to the trench’’ but it was too late because my leg was stunned and I was paralyzed with fear and pain. And I was shot with a bullet.
April 25 1915
3.00 pm
The general quickly got me to a near by hospital. When I woke up the doctor told me I had to stay and heal. but a sniper hit the doctor and I had to leave the hospital with just a bandage and a safety kit. And I had to go back to the war.I was weakened but I had to still fight to the very end. Even if I die I need to keep going on. bullet were everywhere many people died and gunshot killed most of the animals. The battle was long and the leader was wounded.
April 25 1915
7.00 pm
We have been shooting for hours but we couldn’t win. I turned around and saw bullets everywhere in the ground, water and boats. I heard the other sides general insulting us and mocking us and with my last bullet I shot their general. I saw his corpse rolling down the hill. And the other side stopped shooting they were shocked that their leader was dead. They started retreating up the hill, while we were celebrating with joy on the ships. We won the battle for Gallipoli!
April 26 1995
6.00 am
We were sailing for hours and hours and most of us were starving to death on the boats.It was bad enough that people shot most of the boats but now were losing people. The people in the boats also started to lose their minds. On one boat somebody ate a dead corpse and almost ate all the people their. His friend had to shoot him, so he wouldn’t kill others. I noticed that he cried while shooting at his friend. Many he killed were his friend. Suddenly we saw some land. We landed in a thick wet forest deep in Amazon rainforest.
April 27 1995
12.00 am
We gathered materials and made some weapons because we were low on bullets and people. We moved around for hours searching for village, a city or a way to get back home. We stopped looking and searching so we headed back to the boats. We finally got home by boats and we headed home. We were celebrating in my house and started a party. At the end of the day we thought about our victory and everyone went back to their houses.
Great work, Heshan! I like the way you were very descriptive and I think you should make the font bigger and check some sentences. Other than that, Well done!
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