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Thursday, 12 June 2014

The Blood Hound

the bloodhound
I am a great detective,
My nose is very effective,
I can sniff guilty with a great distance,
And then they lead a bad existence,
My known record for conviction,
Has earned me lots of malediction,
For those folks who trail over crime i sented,
And sent to prison unlamented,
folks either avoid temptation,
Or face my nasal accusation.

4 comments:

  1. Hey Heshan,
    Your Blood hound poem is very nice but the only problem is remember to put a capital on the title aside from that good work

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  2. Hi Heshan
    nice blood hound story but please put the capital I that was just a little mistake but you have done well
    keep it up.

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